poem, even after reading it twice !!
Concept/Idea/Inspiration : Aishwarya P Singh
He has been the one whose constant pestering made me think over it and give it a shot !!
A million thanks for I never knew I could write this way (comments will tell which way :P)!!
Hic! … hangover … hope
......On either side of the couch, eyes locked, as if for ever
......Both pleading, yet promising to be together, forever
She wondered over his words and he pondered over hers
It was the only sore of their relationship they had to nurse
Will he ever leave it? she thought, listless, as the silence loomed
Oh lord! How do I explain to him, the feeling of feeling marooned
'I know it isn't good, but then you know I am not very regular '
You know I'll never let you down, he'd said all, as if to an arbiter
Questions had questioned the answers, doubts had struggled with facts
But now, only an unnerving lull around, calling for one of them to act
She unlocked the gaze with a sigh, her belief clouded by the mist in her eyes
Deluged with thoughts, as he was trying to surmise, tiny hands tugged his tie
They were on cloud nine when she had arrived to complete their world
He had avered to be the best dad and care for her the way shell, a pearl
Small footsteps and candid smile, twinkling eyes that seem to brighten each sight
'Oh my little angel' he hugged her, as she kissed upon his cheek with sheer delight
Concealed in it, was a request he felt, breaking away all illusions he never could
What a moron I had been? He gasped, now taking in all that were for their good
“I promise I’ll never look back at it dear ”, he vowed, as he took her hands in his
She pulled herself close to his heart, not trying to be sane in the moment like this
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A resolution unlike the new years', made and meant to be kept forever
Setting aside that glass of beer, certain of a new beginning altogether!!
8 comments:
Way too long...still trying to read & finish before my eye lids close my pupils to see the dreamzzz...lolzz...I liked the previous post..Short & Sweet.. :)
Will comment on this one once I complete....CYA..Sleep Dreamzzz
Still a nice post...its gud you put down your words here. :)
Smile.
Just one word ady for u....Beautiful !!! i loved this one from the beginning to end !!!
To seize and put into words , even an iota of human emotion seems impossible . But the aptness of the words expressing them here appear as precious jewels set in the ring .
Too Good a Poem.
Am I proud or Am I proud to coaxed you to the world of blogging!!
Girl you have arrived and tenzin maiya ki jay ho!!
Creative Juices are flowing..
One word for it :PURE
Epitome of PURITY. Reading such stuff makes you feel good.
We need to work on our book soon before this corporate quicksand gobbles us up...
PS : tamanna ka unabridged version as well as some arbit lines as well available.
Working on another one. Comments welcome as usual
Corrigendum:
tsk tsk its supposed to be "to have coaxed you into"
Her highness truly apologises for that momentary lapse of grammar
am i delighted or am i delighted to have such wonderful comments from her highness and master critic !!
maalkin ..... aap jab bhi kahengi humka, hum kittab par kaam suru kardenge !! :)
jai tenzin maiyya!!
u wrote it well... very nice.
but honestly, i couldn't get the context right...and unless tht is clear, i m not being able to see thru ur eyes....its like the classic problem of 7 blind men and the elephant.....
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