Another chapter ended today, yet another dream over
another beginning is to begin, so come lets start all over
it's virgin
like the drops on the window pane, of the very first winter rain
and vivacious
like a naughty kid on a high, when he catches a butterfly
yet full of vigor
all to herself with tracks as map, like an athlete in her final lap
Cheers! to setting out on what we desire and deserve the most!!
P.S. Continuing with the tradition, the beautiful start is courtesy Aish !! ... thanks buddy !!
15 comments:
small, yet this one's dedicated to Prinku, Sanchita, Shreyans and Bhai :) but above all to my Mom n Dad !!
Its feeling like coming out of Den or hideout after a stormy chilling winters.... snow melting.... giving life to new flora & fauna.. living beings can now enjoy & start preparation for the coming spring... hurrayyyyy
hip hip hurrayy !!!
Small, beautiful, and meaningful.... . Good work Aditi... you have inspired me too to write... :)
Every exit is an entry somewhere. :)
hm...
ye mast tha..
very hopeful.. and aspiring...
Full marks for APA referencing:)
Waise, thanks for giving meaningful direction to a morning flash thought.
To me,the best of your blogs so far..coz its short, simple....full of life, freshness and excitement.
moreover, its strictly as per my internal policy you know:)
gud one di .... amongst your best .... amazin parallels drawn ... :)
adi is this poem ur idea or aish.............
jus joking.........
u have written it so beautifully.........
u can make it a bit more longer...........
it ended so early...................i wanted to read more.........................
:)******************** ;)
hey shreyans !! tenzin will die for sure if she reads ur comments ;))
a very apt line ... thanks vikas :)
neha!! hopin i met ur stds !!
maurya ! waitin to read ur blog ! shubh kaam me deri kyun ?? :)
thanks bhai!! So happy to have ur comments!!
aish ! ap saath dete jao ... front, middle or end ... we'll go on competing with the previous ones fr even better comments!
zyada ho gaya kya :P
finally prinku ! as i've written.. Aish has given the perfect beginning :)
Just happened to find your blog, rather glad I did... Very well written.
glad to have your comments!! thanks :)
Amazin piece ! As refreshing as the first Dew droplets in the morning.
Beautiful thought, well complied. But cant believe that Aish even has a iota contribution in the same :-O
If its not personal aditi, can you let us know what was the chapter and what is the new beginning?
It seems you were exhausted by the last work but still look forward to the new one.
@ suresh : thanks :) feelin priviledged to have ur comments ..... do read the next .....
@ vipin : hey i was looking forward to your comments on my next one !!
i didn't want to increase the already cluttered comment section.... but................. nahin nahin, didi ne kuch nahin kaha comment likhne ko :p
tht apart... its a nice poem. I know one principle in life and thts, "Simple is beautiful"...and this poem fits into it very well..... OK, i can write a hell lot on this, now once I started, but I think this is not the write place for it.
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